Sunday, July 5, 2015

Bits of Screenwriting 101 by Film Crit Hulk

I finished reading Screenwriting 101 by Film Crit Hulk, and I recommend it for anyone who writes stories—not only screenplays.

Below are some of my favorite passages. I highlighted a lot of stuff, so narrowing it down was hard!

Hulk's working definition of storytelling:
a good narrative is compelling to the audience, economically told, feels real either in terms of emotion, detail, or texture, and speaks to some thematic truth that you recognize in yourself or the world at large.

On inspiration carrying you through to the end of a story:
A finished film is as close to the inspiration that spawned it as that original scribbled note on a napkin. To the creator, they are conceptually the same thing, no matter how much they might have changed. Never forget that. Because the germ of your idea can be the thing that must constantly light the fire underneath you as you go forth. When you are in the slog of working out the logistics, you must find that same inspiration. Even if the project radically changes, the idea itself should be a through-line that saves your script throughout the process. The moment of inspiration is both your motive and motivation.

On endings:
If all the ideas in our films mean something, then your ending should say everything. [...] do not look at the ending of your piece as a burden, but as an opportunity. An opportunity to say everything you want to say in your movie. It is an opportunity to be poetic, resonant, and interesting. It is an opportunity to be soulful and underline the purpose of storytelling.

On heroes:
It’s not that anyone can be a hero, but that a hero can come from anywhere.

On the hero's journey, and how you don't have to use that model for a good hero story:
Christopher Nolan’s The Dark Knight is 1) about a superhero 2) one of the most respected and successful superhero films ever and 3) and it doesn’t even really touch the Campbell model in any strong way. Instead, it’s built around moment-to-moment propulsion of story. It grounds its characterization in theme and keeps things going in a far more involving and modern way.

On forward motion that keeps the audience interested:
So what I’m saying is that you come up with an idea and it’s like ‘okay, this happens’ and then ‘THIS happens.’ No no no. It should be ‘this happens’ and THEREFORE ‘this happens.’ BUT ‘this happens’ THEREFORE ‘this happens.’

On genre:
Every kind of story is different. Every one of them works with a certain set of expectations and catharsis. And part of being able to write any kind of story means you should know how to write every kind of story.

On Tarantino's mastery of cinematic mechanisms:
People think that Tarantino is always trying to be cool or that he makes “cool” films, but if you ask Hulk this is a spectacular misdiagnosis. Yes, Quentin wants his films to be cool, but that’s not how he actually constructs them! Seriously! Oftentimes, his characters are grounded in a kind of regularity and focus on the mundane. He obsesses in the obscure and the uncool. More than that, he constructs his films in terms of function: his long-form dialogues are just as much about classic innovations of drama and build up and tension. He’s a guy who knows his craft and knows the purpose of every single cinematic mechanism he’s employing.

On the most important thing in writing adaptations:
You want the people of the property to be the same people in the film. That’s everything, really. Audiences just want to recognize the characters they have come to love or be fascinated by.

On getting through the first draft:
Just write the first draft no matter what. Don’t care if it’s good. Don’t care if it even works. Don’t care even if it’s gobbledygook. Just get it done. It doesn’t matter. Get it all up on the page because no one ever has to see it. Remove the paralysis. Get in a place so you can see it all before you. So you can see what needs to be done and how it needs to be changed. And then? Do, like, 7 rewrites... at least.

On having thick skin:
James Gunn said: “The key to show business is to give 110% while simultaneously not giving a shit.” Give 110% percent because you can’t accomplish anything in this business without enthusiasm and genuine intent. Be joyful and take pride when things go well. But don’t give a shit in the sense that you have to take rejection in stride. Don’t let failure bother you.

Monday, June 22, 2015

Chuck, Fringe, and Haven: Story arc similarities

I noticed a pattern.

Chuck, Fringe, and Haven all follow a similar story arc with their male and female lead characters.

The story arc goes like this: a female government agent arrives in town for a specific case. She teams up with a man who has secrets (some he knows about; some he isn't aware of). They start off in a professional relationship. Later it turns romantic. Then, things change:
  • Man loses woman
  • Woman takes on a new identity
  • Woman returns (but is she still the same person?)

This cycle happens at least twice in each show, but despite these similarities, each show explores this story arc differently.

Let's take a look, show by show. (Spoilers ahead. And for simplicity, I'm leaving out most of the sci-fi inner workings in these shows.)

The characters

Chuck and Sarah, Chuck (x)
The female government agent: Sarah (CIA) comes to Burbank to secure the Intersect.
The man with secrets: Chuck inadvertently uploads government intelligence into his brain, via secret technology called the Intersect. That's the secret he knows about. The ones he doesn't know about: His parents worked for the CIA, and his dad was part of the team that developed the Intersect.

Olivia and Peter, Fringe (x)
The female government agent: Olivia (FBI) goes to Boston to investigate deaths on a commercial flight.
The man with secrets: No one knows much about what Peter was doing right before he started working with the FBI. Those are his secrets. The secret he doesn't know about: he was born in the Red Universe.

Nathan and Audrey, Haven (x)
The female government agent: Audrey (FBI) follows a federal prison escapee to Haven.
The man with secrets: Nathan can't feel any physical sensation because of the Troubles. The secret he doesn't know about: he is adopted.

The cycles

In Chuck, the first time Chuck loses Sarah is to a mission—she goes undercover at Volkoff Industries and pretends to turn against the CIA (new identity). After they capture Volkoff, Sarah returns to her life in Burbank. The second time, Chuck loses Sarah to a faulty Intersect she uploaded into her brain. In the aftermath, she loses her memories of him (new identity). The series ends with Sarah asking Chuck to tell her about everything they've been through together, so that implies that they'll try to build their relationship again. So, woman returns but she's not the same as before she left, and the relationship is different.

In Fringe, Peter loses Olivia the first time when she gets trapped in the Red Universe. But there's a twist—Olivia's double (let's call her Altlivia) comes over to the Blue Universe and poses as Olivia. Peter doesn't realize they switched, so he doesn't know that he lost his Olivia. Meanwhile, Olivia pretends to be Altlivia in the Red Universe (new identity) but then she blows her cover and fights her way back to the Blue Universe. Olivia comes back safely but the dynamic between her and Peter is different because of the relationship he had with Altlivia in Olivia's absence. The second time, William Bell's consciousness takes over Olivia (new identity), and Peter loses her temporarily until the team can bring her back. Peter loses Olivia again briefly in season 5, because they are separated and then trapped in amber. But he finds her and frees her. (No new identity in this cycle.) So, woman returns as herself but the relationship changes a little each time.

In Haven, Nathan loses Audrey when she enters the Barn to stop a meteor shower that is destroying the town. Audrey comes back as Lexi (new identity), with a different personality and (seemingly) no memories of Nathan. Audrey is back to herself but later, Mara takes overs (loss #2 and another identity). And then Audrey returns but is ill; seemingly dies (loss #3, no new identity), but then Mara's mother brings Audrey back. At the mid-break of season 5, Audrey seems to be back to herself. So, the woman returns and we're not sure if anything is different.

Even though the lead characters in Chuck, Fringe, and Haven follow similar story arcs, the stories, their developments, and the outcomes are all different.

Monday, June 15, 2015

New playlist on 8tracks: Sepia Summer


I posted a new playlist—Sepia Summer. You can listen to it over on 8tracks and the songs are listed below.
  1. A Little Less Conversation - Elvis Presley
  2. Summer of '69 - Bryan Adams
  3. Danger Zone - Kenny Loggins
  4. Grease - Frankie Vallie
  5. Hooked on a Feeling - Blue Swede
  6. A Hard Day's Night - The Beatles
  7. Come Unto Me - The Mavericks
  8. Johnny B. Goode - Chuck Berry
  9. Suspicious Minds - Elvis Presley
  10. You Are the Woman - Firefall
  11. Five O'Clock World - The Vogues
  12. Unchained Melody - The Righteous Brothers
  13. The Longest Time - Billy Joel
  14. Ordinary World - Duran Duran
  15. Here Comes the Rain - The Mavericks
  16. Baba O'Riley - The Who
Original image by Schub@ shared via CC BY-NC-SA 2.0. Colors were modified in the version that appears here.

Saturday, May 23, 2015

Matt Murdock's ordinary acts

A while ago, I wrote a few tweets tagged #OrdinaryActs, and the idea was that these are little things superheroes do to blend in, to make it seem like they have ordinary lives. For example...



We know a hot cup of coffee wouldn't affect Clark, and we know Peter has excellent hand-eye coordination, but these are everyday moments where they could play up being ordinary.

And then I watched the Daredevil Netflix series and saw that Matt Murdock does these kinds of things too. Even though he has heightened senses and is not in total darkness, he pretends at complete blindness when he is around people in his everyday life.

Small things, like reaching out to touch a door frame or missing someone's hand for a handshake. Relying on his cane as he walks down the sidewalk, but we know he can toss it and run, full-speed, if he wants to.

I love seeing details like that, where Matt acts that way on purpose as part of his disguise.

It's a reversal: He stops pretending when he puts on the mask.

Sunday, February 22, 2015

Reverse engineering Odd Thomas

In Screenwriting 101 by FilmCritHulk, Hulk explains the process of creating characters by matching up specific kinds of information to the human body. You start at the feet and work your way up to the head: "You start factual, then get emotional, then ideological, and then amalgamate those details into an actual character psychology."

He details the process and then suggests an exercise: look at an existing character and fill in the information for them.

I want to work through that for Odd, the main character in Odd Thomas (movie version, not book version). I like that this is a superhero story where the character doesn't think of himself as a superhero, and I like the idea of pulling it apart to see how that character works.

So here I go with Hulk's process.

Feet (Physical details and basic facts)

  • Appearance: Male, Caucasian, mid-twenties, average height, lean build, dark hair, blue eyes
  • Family: Father is police chief. Mother has been in a psych ward since Odd was 12 years old because she claimed to have psychic abilities and had violent episodes. No siblings. Middle class. We don't know about any other family members.
  • Friends: Viola (waitress at the diner); Stormy (girlfriend)
  • Location: Pico Mundo (desert town in California)
  • Occupation: works as a short order cook at a diner. Also unofficially helps out with police investigations because he inherited his mother's psychic abilities.

 

Groin (What does he want?)

  • A simple life, because his psychic abilities complicate his life
  • To keep his abilities secret (so that he doesn't end up like his mother)
  • To be with Stormy

 

Heart (What does he need?)

  • Needs to have a purpose for his abilities (he believes they are a gift he is meant to use)
  • Needs to have someone in his life who accepts him as he is, despite all the weirdness in his life. (That person is Stormy.)

 

Throat (How does he sound and project himself?)

  • Speaks quietly but confidently
  • Sarcastic, especially with Stormy
  • Gives off a casual, easy-going vibe, despite all the danger that surrounds him
  • Is confident about his abilities and insistent when he needs his father's help
  • Accepts his abilities as a matter-of-fact—he doesn't brag about them and he doesn't shy away from them. 
  • Is honest when he can be (with his father and with Stormy) about what he sees and what he knows. When he can't be completely honest, he tells people what they need to know so that they stay safe.
  • Knows how to fight and take care of himself, but he isn't aggressive or violent unless he really needs to be (like when the bad guy is after him or people's lives are in danger)

 

Left cheek ("left-brained" abilities)

  • Intelligent, sometimes more than he lets on
  • Investigates on his own and sometimes will talk through things with Stormy
  • Good observer
  • Works a lot like a detective would: figure out a suspect, piece together a timeline, go through a process of elimination until he has a clear picture of a situation

 

Right cheek ("right-brained" abilities)

  • Thinks outside the box (because of his psychic abilities)
  • Strong belief in justice and righting wrongs
  • BUT will break the law for a greater good
  • Acts on gut feelings as much as logical decisions
  • Doesn't see himself a superhero
  • Believes in a higher power and an afterlife (but isn't more specific than that)

 

Crown (Who is this character?)

Odd Thomas is a man with psychic abilities that he uses to solve crimes and help people. Because of the weirdness in his life, he tries to keep other aspects of his life simple and grounded. He is confident about his psychic abilities and helping people but also humble, never bragging about what he can do and never considering himself a superhero. He is intelligent and methodical in solving crimes, but he can also be impulsive. He has a matter-of-fact mindset about his circumstances, accepting his abilities and using them to help people.